Can Someone Help Me Check For Errors,just Some Creative Writing .im Just Venting In Form Of A Poem Or Song?

I know eval fallow me I’m be desieave, by things I don’t feel or actually see.
The problem is I’m looking and searching with my eyes and forgot to following my heart, i believe that’s where it actually starts .
To be foolish enough to look for material things.like looks ,money and flashy rings.
Forgetting about pease ,joy ,love and humanity ……..still in working progress